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Tu... sejas lá tu quem fores
Quer conheça ou 'inda não
Estou fartinha das dores
Que me aflige o coração

Tu... sejas lá tu quem fores
Vê se apareces de vez
Se fores os mesmos amores
Não nos chegaram as três

Tu... sejas lá tu quem fores
Podes ser outra pessoa
Tantas marés e maiores
Pode ser que já nem doa
Tu...
-=[ Vague translation ]=-
You... whomever you are
An acquaintance or not yet
I'm sick and tired of the pains
That afflict my heart

You... whomever you are
Show up already
If you're the same loves
The three weren't enough for us

You... whomever you are
You can be somebody else
So many and bigger tides
Mayhap it doesn't even hurt anymore


It doesn't rhyme, but this is a translation, not a new poem.
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ASCII - Hearts a Mess by kreelah
ASCII - Hearts a Mess
It looks more "smily" than I intended. The expression was supposed to be neutral... numb.
As it turned out, just consider it a sort of Gioconda's smile. :shrug:
Heartbreaker:invisible:

"Hearts a Mess" is © Gotye

This ASCII Art © to me!
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  • Mood: Lonely
  • Listening to: Gotye - "Hearts a Mess"
  • Drinking: Red wine
The videoclip is akin to something out of Tim Burton's imagination.
The song is hauntingly beautiful, sad, desperate and still hopeful at the same time.

I'm still a mess.
I'll post some ASCII art later on.

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"Dez por cento
É muito pouco!"
Zomba a minha cabeça

"Por um momento
Ou dois sem troco
Resta pouco que mereça

Carpir tanto lamento
E lamentar como um louco
Nessa penumbra espessa
Tornando o aqui e agora
O monstro que te devora"
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== Rought translation ==
"Ten per cent
Is very little!"
Scoffs my head

"For a moment
Or two with no exchange
There's little left which deserves

Indulging in such lament
And lamenting like a fool
In that thick dusk
Making the here and now
The monster that devours you"
Written on 2014-07-23.
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  • Mood: Lonely
  • Listening to: Gotye - "Hearts a Mess"
  • Drinking: Red wine
The videoclip is akin to something out of Tim Burton's imagination.
The song is hauntingly beautiful, sad, desperate and still hopeful at the same time.

I'm still a mess.
I'll post some ASCII art later on.

Bullet; Red Admin of:         Bullet; Purple Member of:
   :iconmidnightcreations:              :iconeuropeans: :iconpt: :iconcantosdeportugal: :iconfct: :iconfound-in-translation::icontheknotters:
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